When you're a bit too into internal consistency

[lanzelotti]

 

Yup, the workload is meant to be light, and it isn't complete yet. I have to plan this stuff for plotbunny potential and to show it's indeed a Courtesan School.

"But Deniisu," you say, "that's a Finishing School with some sexy bits thrown in!" Yes. That's the joke — the line between a Gentleman and a Whore in Maia is thin indeed.

p.s. I should make a freaking Minato icon for this DW. The sim is already done, I just need some good pics! The mermaid ones do not count because of a lack of glasses :P 

Comments

[lanzelotti]

I usually do not make charts and schedules, but I was skimming my already-written chapters and noticed one of the days had six periods instead of five without justification, so I had to Fix It and Make a Chart.

The other thing I have to do is a Hawthorne family tree, but if I do it, it would be posted under a flock for sure - it's spoilery as hell.

Posting excerpts at FFA is a good way to find little things to fix, though! Sometimes my head gets too into big picture / overarching plot mode and I forget to check on the words themselves!

[kalloway]

Ah, that makes sense. I've definitely done the 'wait, haven't they had lunch twice now?' thing and had to sit down and schedule out days, etc.

[lanzelotti]

The good thing is that the "one chapter per day to set up the school" part will last until chapter 8 (writing ch7 right now), I think. Then I have more leeway with my structure, letting plot and character dictate it, instead of setting.

Not that there's no plot - starting with ch 4 (already posted on meme), the narrative starts getting denser, despite the larger size (chapters 1~3 are 10 pages avg, 4+ are 15 pages). Characterization and reveals, galore, too.

Also, by ch7 it looks like the first arc is starting to wrap up, ohoho~

YES I KNOW I'M SOUNDING LIKE A BRAGGART but this work is a goddamn miracle by breaking my old 20k upper limit, by myself writing every day (150 words min.), and by having a vague idea of arcs and conflicts, instead of knowing only the beginning and the end :P

[kalloway]

Yay! I'm glad it's working for you. I should set some goals like that and try for a few longer thing that keep rolling around in my head (once it's not so hot).